http://anatbel.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] anatbel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anatbel 2007-09-21 06:46 pm (UTC)

Не согласен. Нормальная рифма.
Повышенные требования к сверхточности предъявляются (if предъявляются) к рифме 1-2-5.
Рифма 3-4 тоже должна быть точной, но без фанатизЬма. :)
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